Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Howard Show not Tell

1. Tame was overwhelmed about going on his first fishing trip, he thought he was going to catch lots of fish. But he doesn’t know that its really not that easy to do. He jumps up and down while he waits for his ride. His ride come and he hops in...

2.Emily was raging because she wanted to go shopping with her older sister. So she could buy  something new and get out of the house for a while. She really wanted to go but her sister constantly says “ No I’m going with my friends stay home”.

1 comment:

  1. You really needed to make sure you SHOWED the emotions. How could you tell Emily was angry? What did she do? What did her face look like? What did she say?


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