On Tuseday I went to the Pools. As soon as I got there I payed to get in.
I started walking inside when I got in through the doors and smelt the chlorine. The Men’s dressing room was on the other side of the pool. Walking as fast as I could trying not to slip on the wet slippery floor.
I finally got to the Men’s changing room. When I walked inside I went to a toilet and got changed in there. Everyone was wearing blue and red shorts. I was wearing blue and white shorts.
As soon as I walked out of the changing room I jumped straight into the pool forgetting to have a shower. So I got out and walked there. I was checking witch one was cold witch one was warm I hoped in the warm one. When it turned off I hoped in the cold one so it felt normal in the big cold pool.
I was bombing in the pool from the diving board my whole body touched the ground. Then I saw Antonio and James coming in through the doors. As soon as Antonio saw me him and his brother ran to and got changed at the chairs and then hoped in the pool. So we played and played until it was time to go home.
I started walking inside when I got in through the doors and smelt the chlorine. The Men’s dressing room was on the other side of the pool. Walking as fast as I could trying not to slip on the wet slippery floor.
I finally got to the Men’s changing room. When I walked inside I went to a toilet and got changed in there. Everyone was wearing blue and red shorts. I was wearing blue and white shorts.
As soon as I walked out of the changing room I jumped straight into the pool forgetting to have a shower. So I got out and walked there. I was checking witch one was cold witch one was warm I hoped in the warm one. When it turned off I hoped in the cold one so it felt normal in the big cold pool.
I was bombing in the pool from the diving board my whole body touched the ground. Then I saw Antonio and James coming in through the doors. As soon as Antonio saw me him and his brother ran to and got changed at the chairs and then hoped in the pool. So we played and played until it was time to go home.
I like the pools too Howard. Sounds like you had some fun with your friends. I like how you are using paragraphs in this story.
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